While actually drawing out some of the pages of my practical, I realised that I may have been a little ambitious and point, and other parts just didn't work compared to the thumbnails, so made minor changes on some. Page 15, below, probably got the most changes; the panels at the bottom went in the other direction, with a different fight sequence. I thought that a throw would work out better, but I had to use some reference from that.
I tried to pick out some of the more dramatic poses that, together, would give the viewer more of a sense of what was happening. I don't think I did too badly on this, although I think the last panel needs a bit more 'oomph' which I might try to fix if I have time.
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